1)
Pitch: Click Here for Video
2)
Feedback:
All of the feedback so far has been extraordinarily helpful. The concerns about
safety had a particularly strong influence on my approach to this assignment. Within
the feedback I received, this appeared to be the concern that most evidently
warranted a revision to the product’s design. I used Elevator Pitch No. 2 as a
platform to present this revision and elicit additional feedback.
3)
Changes:
I’ve included a small companion device that mounts securely to the handlebar of
a motorcycle. This device is equipped with a button that will mute/unmute the
headphones, allowing the rider to focus on road conditions and situational
awareness when necessary.
Hey Zachary, nice job with your pitch! I really like the changes you made to your product as a whole. I think that the safety features you have added will make a huge difference and make your product more profitable. As far as the pitch, I think you did a good job at showing personality and describing your idea. But, I would try to make it a little more professional, maybe by having someone else record you. Good job!
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